How might this perfection be realized.
If not for the view of imperfection?
Has not God's green acres flawed design?
In ways, no sugar coated confection!
Take the perceived beauty of golden rod.
Lovely yellow flower and stem of green.
But it causes sneezing and it's seems odd!
A thing so perfect,yet imperfect it seems.
Life isn't free from it's own flaws,
Yet we live it liberally just the same!
Imperfections make it better because,
Rainbows are a mix of sunshine and rain.
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A contest entry
- ~Beautiful Imperfection~ by Hope Angel.
585 points, ended March 16, 18 entries
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Yes this is so true. Life is full of ups and downs, but life is only as beautiful as you choose it to be. Thank you for entering
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I think you might have missed the point in this. It saying perfection is enhanced by comparing it to imperfections. And life in general is a rainbow mixture of light and dark,good with the bad. But still...thanks for hosting all the same.
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very beautiful, and contemplative thoughts, the imagery is at once tranquil and peaceful.
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