garland of segmental hours
scrapbook of cast's bleeding flowers
voices fading
soon forgetting
autumn's
gasps
of silent splinter
just another moment broken
just another shade
of winter
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- Titles # 4 by cirque du soleil.
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garland of segmental hours
scrapbook of cast's bleeding flowers
oohh..I love the imagery here....especially the bleeding flowers concept..I've never looked at it that way, I guess..
Nice choice of title, by the way :-)
I like the last lines.
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it is always eternal Eden for those who see with their hearts. Wonderful.
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Eternal summerland will soon be here.
Good luck in contest.
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wow
very nice, for getting autumns you go into winter wonder land, bleeding flowers stuck out for me. Flowers don't really don't bleed, but is was very nicly written. It was very much a pleasure to read your work.
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How many winters still before eternal spring?
Ack,
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