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For Awhile

Eyes; reflection of cold ash,
depth of soul counts sorrow
where love sleeps.

Lips; hidden smiles, weighed down
by tears of ignored hopes.

Soul; emptied, where heart pleaded
for miracles; rejection realized.

Ache; keeps company with time,
sand blows with winded meanings.

Kisses; on a beautiful cheek as heavy hugs
blend with meaningless sighs.

Another sleepless night bends
thoughts into faded days,

of un-photographed
memories.

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  • strong with emotion


  • Amera gold member
    February 9

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    Great work as you start each stanza with a thought to be expressed then you end the poem with a killer line. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    February 9

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    True Poet sis

    your words you have chose are just so perfect

    absolutely wow!

    God bless you sis...