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In The Morning



I can’t remember your name,
just the etchings of pain

in the morning.

You can’t hide in your face,
the wrinkles of our disgrace

in the morning.

Yet for the moment we’re bitten,
lost, enchanted and smitten

until the morning.


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  • Kathraina silver member
    February 8

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    A wonderful piece. Great take on the prompt. Amazing flow in your words here. Bravo!
    Thank you for entering and good luck

    ♥ Kathraina