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I am lost in life
to the point of being mute
lightning seeks thunder




A contest entry

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  • duana
    February 9, 2009

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    Most Original In the Contest and Most Compelling (now that I think about it!)

    wow this is such a strong and powerful poem. And so thought provoking. It adds a physical force to just words on a page and pulls the reader in. It could be a scene in Harry Potter (that is supposed to be a high compliment - but the entrants are much more sophisticated and skilled than the judge!). Great job and amazing haiku. So opposite than all the others in the contest which pulled at your heart strings in a tender way. This is more of a jolt. Another one that deserved a trophy had I more to give.


    • Peteskid gold member
      February 9, 2009
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      Duana-
      well, most of my efforts at haiku are not so good...so i appreciate this, and trophy icons ..i have plenty, no worries there...Thank you for your kind words...so much appreciated...PK


  • Providence
    February 8, 2009

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    Wow. Very powerful haiku while fitting the form in depth and style.

    Wonderfully done, PK...
    as always!

    Marianne


  • Draig aine gold member
    February 8, 2009
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    very cool write


  • Mari Goes
    February 8, 2009

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    Ah, you have a good one here, lost and lightning, mute and thunder...opposite images that worked quite well.
    Interesting contest Duana is hosting here, good to see you joined it

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