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*Gasp!*

Oh my zebra!
You came!
That was amazing.
I love you for that,
You care about my thoughts and try to help.
You surprised me.
You knew I was sad and you made me so much happier.
That surprise at that dance was one in a million.
I love you for that

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  • new light
    February 9

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    aww that was funny yet sweet yet good

    the only thing i think you could change is the last three periods on the last line don't seem necessary

    good one


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 8
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    awwwww such a cute write!!! haha i love the zebra element!

    ♥ Kathraina