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White Lilly Skull Saved Momentarily

A drop of jaded hope is melting face
The heated candle poses waxen white
A lily colored skin is cleaving lace
The hair and pallor gone in deaths' old blight.

Encroached  in demons hold, the girl is cold
A voice is speaking ; lips are not the childs'
The sinister tones are shrieking ;haunted, bold
Is hope a passing dream to chanters wilds?

To quicken pace of lonely feet so bare
A dose of holy water soaks the toes
The shiver drenches gools' unseen to care
The devils' magic glides away in throes.

The light for princess scarcely saves and burns
A freedom fragile needs a priestly urn.

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    March 13
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    I loved the first stanza thank you for entering