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Writer's Block

I'm stuck
Not just in writing
My brain
Feels like its sinking
In the suction
Of sticky, gloopy mud
I can't focus
For more than a few seconds
All of the sudden
I'm lost in a fog
Ugh
Where's a lighthouse
When you need Him?

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Mhm, this sucks. Ohhh welll

Haha, at least I managed to write this? And I really like the rhythm that is randomly in there

Yeah, Taylor just happens to be my lighthouse

^_^

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  • Yemassee gold member
    February 8, 2009
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    I know the feeling. Usually when things are bothering me in the back of my thoughts. I want to write but the head is all foggy. Not much you can do, except wait it out. I'm glad you found a way to get a poem out.

    Yeah, where's your lighthouse when you need him?