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the mistake that took a life

I asked for some distance
some time to think
some time a part
some time, too much time

I thought this would be good
but I guess I thought wrong
you're gone and I'm lost
oh my darling what have I done?

I never wanted you to be
in this position
yet I only chose what's right for me
and now you're gone

I hope you're safe in heaven
I hope they all protect you
*bunny* I was such a fool
my dear what have I done?

you thought I wanted to be without you
but I never wanted you to leave
was I that much for you?
then let me be with you again

I will end my life
just to be together again
you were my best friend
my darling my angel, without you
there is no life

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  • LaYlAlOvE
    March 2, 2009

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    this is sad and ik how it goes i have a guy now who would die for me......and yet i dont know if i could let him go


  • xXdeadXinsideXx
    February 14, 2009

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    It very sad... Sorry to hear about your friend.. :/
    It was beautifully written, great write hun.