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"The Dark Path."

Reverberated inspiration
dipping in, back, out, and forth.
A heart to caress your soul,
to destroy so you can build.
Growth in the most daunting, beautiful, horrifying, enticing ways.

Touch
the sun that gives us life.
Smoldering and blazing red,
a deadly deviant and yet of a necessity all the same.
Perverse mind envelopes my smirk,
I love this.
I want this.
I need this.

Frolic through the supple fields of joyous betrayal.
Carefree,
without hesitation,
without restraint.

...never will I run,
these things will never find me
if I've found them.

Just tools at the dispense of my own?
Can I utilize,
or perhaps manipulate?
Both.

Embrace and evolve.
A crystalline existence,
the most warming pure light,
sparkling hope within the cold black...

shatters so quickly every time.

Losing the grip
and gaining control.
A play-on words
of your confusion
and my pedestal.

Comprehension just a stroke out of reach,
just as it always shall be.


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  • Ahkam silver member
    February 16

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    Nice flow

    wow, what a nice flow and what a beautiful selection of words.tonning up, up,,higher and then suddenly falling down with the concluding remarks, putting the title words, a nice cycle.
    Good luck!


  • Cyanide Dreams
    February 15

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    This was a very interesting poem. The word choice was absolutely brilliant, and the flow was great. The imagery was perfect as well. I didn't get the You'll understand someday concept though, I wonder if you'd be able to explain. lol. Other than that, its a very well penned poem. Good job. Thanks for entering.

    Josh