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What Remains?

The secret scars I have tucked away
for the hidden pain that still remains
so much confusion in this bitter end
lost alone and dying to be loved

The cold whispers of time
fail to heal my wounds
just the ghosts of the past
are intent to steal my sanity

Uncontrollable FEELINGS OF DESPAIR
lost in this lonliness that's choking the air
I wish I could climb into darkened place
hide myself from the world outside
live without emotion

No one cares
the night is cold and bleak
I am ashamed
of my ugly face

The tensions mounting
no warmth embrace
The time is ticking
the love I have is bleeding
can't life give some sort of an answer


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