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Gothic girl

Her skin is like the falling snow
her lips are like a pale rose
when I see her my world falls apart
my Gothic girl

You can see she's confident
wearing black lace and high boots
you can see truly in the Devils embrace

With her purple eyes
her breasts so warm
once you taste her blood
your hooked on her love

This little Demon Gothic girl
has got me in a swirl
never say die
don't leave me alone in the night
just keep your body close and keep me away from the light

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