honeysuckle vine
blooming perfuming dawn air
hummingbird hovers
Author notes
Traditional 575
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku any style by misticmoonlite.
700 points, ended February 11, 2009, 30 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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LOVELY
stunning

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good write, good memories


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YEP
hummingbirds love sweet flowers to drink their syrups, thank you for this entry...good luck in my contest..mm

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Very, um dunno how to describe it... rich, weighty language?
Great stuff- like it a lot!




