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Only Thee knoweth

Thou Love!

Who fell in love, with Love

Adorned as One!

First born  of Chaos

Queen

Great Mother

Goddess of Heaven

Upon Thee

Your feet caress the stars

Celestial Nymph

Bride

Beloved of gods

Pillar of Caelous

Mighty

Love, perfect, unconditional

Within your arms appease

All Creation bound

To thy loving breasts

Oh, Mother!

Alone Thee knoweth of love, and I (....)

 Within your love reside

Within your Greatness abide

To thy adored Law.

Blessed be

My Queen.

 

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Contest: Heart`s journey
Prompt: There is no love greater than love with no obsect
For then you, yourself, have become love itself
Rumi (1207-1273)

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  • StormyDawn
    February 25

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    I have to be honest, I didn't care for this much. I'm not a fan of the old english wording(it's a little confusing for me). That is only my opinion. I'm sure your other writes are really good.


  • Perfect Asymmetry
    February 25

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    Wow, this piece is amazing, beautifully written. Love has let me down too many times, but I still have to admit she's a queen, a goddess. Only love can both make you feel so down or make you touch the sky. Brilliant wright.
    Nela


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    February 21

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    Written in perfect trust; written in perfect love my brother
    She who is love the way to worship her “is in the heart that rejoices”
    Well penned
    Blessed be
    Robert


  • Paloszoo gold member
    February 17

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    This was truly a pleasure to read. Very interesting piece! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!


  • BonnieQ silver member
    February 8

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    A Master's Pen at Work

    Beautifully written, dear Brother, with vivid imagery and great flow; surely a winner in this contest! Though, you know I cannot agree with its contents. Nothing, however, can take away from the beauty you weave with golden threads.

    Much luv & hugs, SisBon


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    February 8

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    very lovely

    such a true pleasure to read

    God bless you my friend...


    • Angelo di Luce gold member
      February 8
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      I am so glad you liked my write dear poetess, it is always a pleasure to have your reviews
      blessings


  • Jalalbad gold member
    February 8
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    So I see.
    Pam Wakins

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