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Heavenly Sprites

Oooohhh  Nana  watch Nana as I've got to the top

we're sliding down rainbows with all that we've got

me and my friend Thomas

here we go wheeeee

I love dear Thomas and he so loves me

friends forever in fun and larks

I'm glad you met him

my friend in the park

heavenly sprites that's what we are

with angels in care we're never afar

Libithina x x



Author notes

For my dear friend Cathy and her family (especially Mom Susan) in warm rememberance of dear little Chloe and the milestone of this special first birthday
(Thomas is my son born 13.12.1993 died 13.12.1993))
sent in Lib x x

please see also the sister link to this 'Oooohh Nana Angel Cake'
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5035165

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  • penman gold member
    February 20
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. a great expression for the theme. Thank you for sharing


  • daviscth silver member
    February 9

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    I love this Lib and I really can picture these two angels sliding down rainbows and chasing sun beams. Thank you so much for the touching words. You have been a port in the storm for me.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 8
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    a wonderful poem good luck in the contestmaralisa


    • libithina
      February 8
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      that is lovely to hear Maralisa thankyou so much s Lib x x