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Ooohh Nana Angel Cake

        Oooohhh Nana I love this cake youv'e made

        it's covered in all things nice

        starberries, sparkledust golden and fine

        in softest fondant ice

        it smells of you Nana

        that cuddly smell

        who could forget as I know it so well

        and soft warm cheeks

        that huge heart of gold

        always there to have and to hold

        Oooohhh Nana you know I love you

        as I know you love me too

        lets share this cake together Nana

        prepared in love by you

        Mmmm it's so delicious

      so creamy and so soft

      contenting sighs

      with angelic smiles

      laced in heavenly love

      I'll always love you Nana

      you really are the best

      so much love surrounds us

      together truly blessed

      from you to me, from me to you

      we share an ilumined spark

      which sparkles light my special cake

      caressed by your huge heart

      this angel cake has angels kisses

      imprintings on the ice

      that's why that sugary fondant

      is especially incredibly fantastically nice

      and listen dearest Nana

      can you hear their song

      just barely angelic choruses

      in sweetest angelic throng

    they're singing to you and me Nana

    while I blow breezes at the candle so light

    and I know my dear sweet Nana in your heart

    I'll forever be bright. x x x

    For dear Chloe and my dearest Cathy
    sent in love from Lib x x x

     

     

     

     



       

Author notes

this comes written from my heart in warmest love for my dear, dear friend Cathy and her beautiful grandaughter Chloe .. sent in love to all of the family Hugsss to dear Susan x x as a separate cake was prepared for her and one for Chloe and Mom to share x x
please also see 'heavenly sprites' http://allpoetry.com/poem/5035187 sister comp x x

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  • This is just so delightful, and penned into that refreshing and innocent style of yours that is so wonderful. Just a joy to read.


  • daviscth silver member
    February 9

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    This is a wonderful and touching birthday poem poem for baby Chloe Lane. Thank you Lib for taking time to enter this. Love always, Cathy.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 8

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    aw a adorable poem I love angel cake good luck in the contestmaralisa


    • libithina
      February 8
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      Mmmm yes a very special angel cake thanks so very much Maralisa s Lib x x