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Date with Denial

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My date with her was all but the norm
She ripped away a mask I had casually worn
She yelled and screamed and said she was gone
I could not use her to guard my own
She searched and she scraped right to the bone
I could not believe what she had just done
Exposed the facts I hid so well
Threw me into an emotional hell.
Slapped me in the face with what I tried to avoid
As she sat with that smirk I all but enjoyed
Why had she left me to face what was real
The harsh reality that showed no appeal
Now with these feelings I have to accept
I sat next to her, broke down and wept...
After my date with denial, the damage was done
So I lifted my head and carried on?..

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