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diarrhea mouth- shit for brains

Dig this fool  that nature invented
he has but shit for brains
and with those looks diarrhea face
your ugly mug is complimented
by brown feces stains..... so

chorus
what;s that smell
I can't tell
flys repel
my baby's load is killing me.
it's killing me
killing me.

wipe that smile off your face
you look like a baboon
and if you think you don't stink
take a whiff asshole
and you'll find out real soon....... so

chorus
ooh that smell
what the hell
i yell
my baby's load is killing me
it's killing me
killing me.


this dumb monkey has to pee
see now he's all soaking wet
wipe his ass passing gas
it's a stinking bloody mess
but he ain't through  yet..........so

chorus

who can tell
it's a spell
oh well
my baby's load is killing me
it's killing me
killing me.

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  • albymyheart gold member
    February 8, 2009

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    Interesting vocab, but I would think the emotions here could be expressed in a more eloquent manner thus creating a more meaningful piece...alby

  • Just4u
    February 8, 2009
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    Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest

    Eddy