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On Love (A Crown Of Sonnets)

                          1

 

Of what is passing here but time, so time
Is ticking, ticking, ticking, though I live,
In finer style than before, I will to give
My passions still so wildly drift to chime
In bells, so ringing, ringing, ringing fine.
I cherish days and nights, to now relive
The sounds of joy my life has seen outlive,
my soul and here I know my mortal wine.

The steps of Saint Joesph's I held in care
Descending with my bride to waiting friends,
It was my happy life so long ago,
And seems to wait, a love of life so rare
About the home are flowers lush in blends,
To stave off moods of woven darker woe.

                         2                         

To stave off moods of woven darker woe
I sip a coffee brew and think of love,
It comes in flashes here to mind and shove
The darker dreams in flight, my spirits glow.
I seem to see a nicer way and know
It thrives on thoughts of tender warmth above,
So quiet now I wait and hear a dove
As light inside my soul, my hearts tableau.

My dreams are what I have so rent by mead,
It flows solvent in airy whims of fate,
In time, my soul so drinks of heavens light
So love, my love, as soon the path will lead
To home, to life and tender hearts of late
I lay my thoughts as wreathes, in sound delight.

                           3

I lay my thoughts as wreathes, in sound delight
As winter touches near my heart, I see
The boy I once had been, in solid glee
As days are short, I long for warmth and light,
So here my hearth in warming glows invite
A quiet soul to share the time, my key,
My life, my tender loving wife, my plea
To cast off darker plagues of soul tonight!

Yet, love is love and mine will brew for you
A tenderness of heart, a beacon gleams
In darken groves of trees in painted rows,
Be still the dream, a stream of light I drew
We dance by lights enfolding loving beams,
To draw on grace, a feeling surely glows.

                             4 

To draw on grace, a feeling surely grows
In joy and laughter, hearts will beat as one,
As you I see along the path we run
Before I sleep, and when I wake, I know
In tender ways, the years begin to sow,
But though I grey, in age my line has none
So when you dance in winds, my hearts undone,
My love, my sweetest rose, in wreaths of clothes.

So here I show my thoughts of love to keep
The dark at bay, as light the feeling warms,
My lantern glows amid the snowy downs
And cheers us long and timeless years of sleep,
As storms are weathered here, we know the norms
So still we form the bonds of timeless crowns. 


                          5


So still we form the bonds of timeless crowns
Away the show, alight by mortal dawn,
I am but yours, and yours alone so drawn
Of you, I see your flowing tress and gowns,
My dreams of you in these will chance the rounds.
Remember days of youth in art redrawn
We hold the light of joy, in each a fawn,
So cast in marble stands the soul of sounds.

Yet, still I speak my heart on love and life
Enchanting forms of feelings I bestow,
I speak of her as love, my darling wife
My soul in love, my heart is all I know.
A music plays in through the trees of strife
We dance in groves of hushing sweet willow.


                         6

We dance in groves of hushing sweet willow
By breezes swiftly sweeping past us clear,
As snowy drifts enshrouding sweetly near
In warm embrace, we keep a tender glow.
My deepest wish, a dream of you, I know
Has drawn out long, a train of years and years,
As there began a life, so thread the gears
And thrust the pedal down, a pace below.

As thoughts of you so lace my mortal mind
Recalling dreams I knew along the path,
In you, I see the honest love and want.
A tender thrill of time so here refined
As models drawn by art, we draw a bath
We soak the many nights, of old Vermont.

                       7

We soak the many nights, of old Vermont
The cottage life we have and sweet relief,
As love, so heals the wounds and steals the grief.
My life is here complete, I have no want
In passions breathe the winds of starker fonts
I hold in you desire of high belief
And sate my thirsting mind along the reef,
The sails of barks at sea adrift in want.

As hand in hand we have each single day
To drift eternal tides of graceful time,
Of days, of nights we have enough to share
In you, my love has known no bounds to say
and pausing here by scenes of snow sublime,
I know no other soul, as love is rare.











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A crown of sonnets for my wife.
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Comments

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  • oldpoets
    February 27

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    Wonderful work done by a brillent mind. I appreciate the work and time you must of sprent on this. You are indeed a master poet.


  • Ceridwens Soul silver member
    February 27
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    Congratulations! A remarkable achievement and a well deserved spotlight.

  • James Holdaway
    February 27
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    beautiful

    This flowed beautifully and was very touching

  • Eusebius
    February 18

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    Certainly this IS you best work, a tour de force in sonnets...I'm thinking of John Donne here... you have stayed "on point" as the politicos say, right through these sonnets. The first sonnet was perhaps the best and drew me in. I have a few quibbles, but so what--most excellent! I loved them!!!


    • Tirrell
      February 18
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      Thank you michael I am blown away by your words,
      John Donne, I do enjoy his work. Quibbles? Thank you.
      --Robert


  • MargaretG
    February 18

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    I enjoyed reading

    A crown of sonnets is a great achievement, I salute you. I have not had that many thoughts to string together, myself!
    The imagery and emotion were warm and tender, even when alluding to troubles, and the sonnet technique is quite good. The only rhyme I did not like was willow, since I feel that an unstressed syllable cannot be a perfect rhyme for a stressed one.
    Anyway, this is a great piece of work.


    • Tirrell
      February 18
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      Thank you very much,
      I always am self consious when I play with meter.
      Thank you for reading.


  • Frodofan silver member
    February 9

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    It would be interesting to do one of these with the last line being the first line as well. But then I suppose it would be a "ring" rather than a "crown." Very pretty string of sonnets.

    I really liked 3,4, and the final one. In a world where love seemingly dies after marriage, it is nice to be reminded that it isn't always so.


  • suseann
    February 8

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    Beautiful literation composed in a tribute to a soul mate.
    Favorite lines that capture and reverberate-
    "As hand in hand we have each single day
    To drift eternal tides of graceful time,"
    And-
    "I know no other soul, as love is rare."
    Covers a lifetime's worth of loving. 

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