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Glass

I think I'm bleeding
I can't feel my heart beating
I want to lay down and die
Collapse and cry
And I don't know why

But I feel like I'm bleeding
Every part of me dreaming
To come out and feel good
But I just can't.

Sometimes I smile
And the dreams feel so true
Sometimes I need nobody
But right now I need you
I don't know why my heart aches
I don't know what I need
But I'm so broken right now
I just can't help but bleed

Please, rip me apart
Make the pain go away
Tear me open, see me
Hear past the shit that I say

I claim I don't care
I claim that I can't
But I just don't want to be hurt
I'm just tired of this crap

When somebody else cares
That this smile is glass
Please, break this face open
Please, take off my mask

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Just another selfish poem. Feeling emo

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  • LaCkOfCoLoUr
    April 28

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    oh my god the rhyming in this is so simple but so beautiful as well it strikes the message right through i think if you would have used even one word that was different this poem wouldnt have worked so kudoes for your choice of words the simple language in the poem really makes it even more brilliant this a very nice write brimming with emotion yaaaaaay 2 u lolzo,
    xx kt