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Fear Ye Not

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Lo, my love,
   whilst demons might
   rain down upon thee
   like hellfire ~

   taunting, haunting,
   invading thy soul
   with an endless barrage ~

Beloved, fear ye not
   for thy tomorrows:

Neither darkest night,
   nor evil incarnate,
   shall overcome thee.

Inside of thee
   Light Eternal dwells,

   and It's brightness

   shall never be extinguished.

 

 

Author notes

Image prompt, 25-50 Words

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Soft-Rain
    February 9, 2009
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    Outstanding! This was relly a work of true poetry, I loved that she will not be overtaken!


  • Wandering Woodchuck gold member
    February 8, 2009
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    Nice job. I enjoyed this very much. I think it is a great take on the prompt.

    Mike


  • maralisa silver member
    February 8, 2009

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    a wonderful tkae on the image promt good luck in the contestmaralisa

  • Bob Fox
    February 8, 2009
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    Yes

    And the poet strikes a cord for love. Fear not my love, for I await you. Excellent write.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 8, 2009

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    Loving the old world style here.
    uplifting words for the pic. Well done.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • thejollytinker
    February 8, 2009

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    Well, that's a hope-giver indeed. Love the use of old English and you carried it through to the end. Good thought!


  • Pure Thought
    February 8, 2009
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    well penned,

  • XxXEmoTacoXxX
    February 8, 2009

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    I LOVE IT

    I think i need someone to pick up my jaw because it fell off after reading this spendacularific poem of amazing

    Since the suggestion said to relate the thing to line number i think it was amazing line 1 throught line end

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