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Swan Song

Missing image
visual refrain
swan and its reflection
eternal season

In a list

A contest entry

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  • PerVirtuous
    February 26
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    Very nice.


  • Swan song gold member
    February 22
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    The first two lines were tremendous and overall a nice haiku


  • leo2
    February 18

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    Without a lot of words you've said a beak full. The seasons march ever onward only to find you and mother nature always at your best. Good luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • new light
    February 9

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    i love swans, i love all birds (and animals in fact)

    brilliant


  • Denerica
    February 9

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    Beautiful, simply beautiful words to the pic prompt. Just love the eternal season ending. Blessings.


  • Sonja
    February 8

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    Visual refrain ... beautifully chosen words for this haiku.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 7

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    Excellent...

    ...and so beautiful sweet soul!
    Thanks for sharing you, all the best!

    Peace, Timothy

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