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You

You're there in day
You haunt my nights
I feel like murder
I'm in love

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Um....I dont know.....
4+4+4+3=15

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  • Sadpuppet
    February 17
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    ooo...i like this one lots


  • Still Loving
    February 13
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    Niiice, love it.
    just like i love you!!!
    haha


    • Dark and Shallow
      February 13
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      who says im talking about you? o.O joking, joking, joking. I love you too seessy.


      • Still Loving
        February 14
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        I wasn't meaning like that... O.o. I meant I love the poem like I love you niña.


  • Flowergirl
    February 9
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    love the work very nice. i love how you ended w/ im in lov very nice. keep up the great writing.


  • Kiddy
    February 7
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    Nice...good sentiments...Thanks for entering

    Love
    Kiddy

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