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Little Sister

I know that we have never met
and I don't want this to be wierd
but even though today is the first  
we met I love you!

Every scence I was little I always
wanted to know who you were,
what you were like

I'm debating if i should give this to you are not
because I don't to overwelm you.

I heard that you like gymnastics
that one of my favorite things too.

We have baby pictures of you
but thats all

We have tried so many times to find you
but everytime we do
we cant see you. or we can see you
but then something comes up and we
are told we cant

But really you are my little sister.

What do you think?

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