there is calm in quiet
of growing,
when morning awakens
with some dawns static,
clothed in tranquility
then, mind provokes
incitement, thoughts
tenderly aroused
through breathing, life -
stirring on the inside
thoughts provoke
calm of growing dawns,
breathing tranquility
within its stirring
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I wish I could arrange my thoughts is such a form but recently the best I can do is read about it. Maybe, someday soon my muse will remember why I hired her in the first place...lol.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Thanks Leo
your comment cheered me up! Frans
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oops computer was messing up and sidetracked me. forgot these little guys.
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beautiful. I don't know what else to say other than that. Great write!
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Gentle, soft, pure.
A breath of fresh air - and tender care.
I like this a lot. An interesting form you've created sir and it has peaked my curiosity.
Loved this. ~Pamela 
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Thank you Pamela
Enjoyed your stop-over! Even discover a mistake. It's a sort of poem "you can't go wrong with". It leads to interesting outcomes. Hugs to you. Frans
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That felt really light and refreshing. It flows effortlessly and bears a rather resonant tone of deep thought. The only awkward part is the repetition of "stirring" although that is done on purpose so what do I know really
Thank you for taking the time to write this
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Good for you
you picked up the sh-sound we deaf sometimes hear when all seems quite 'out there' - intended and also not intended. Thanks for the read and your comment. Blessings to you. Frans
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Beautiful Frans
You have captured such a serene feeling within your words. I love the early morn when dawn is breaking and nature springs to life. Love to sit on the porch with my morning coffee and let my mind wander to thoughts of loved ones not here with me.A delight to read. Hugs to you.I always enjoy your thoughtful and heartfelt poetry!
Peace and Grace, Sandy
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Thanks Sandy
and to let you into a secrete, I love it when you visit me! Thanks for the read, comment and blessing. Frans -
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You are so welcome. The feeling is mutual. Love to visit you and your your poetry. Sandy
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Lovely And So Calming To One's Spirit
Oh I loved this one Frans. Oh I just took a deep breath of tranquility after and while reading your excellent poem. I love this upon awakening. This is a beautiful way to awaken I must say. I so often wake up with a racing mind of thoughts of my day. Just to stop and breath is a good thing and taking in the very life in which God gave us, just for today. That is all we have, for we just never know when the Lord is coming to take us home. You are so brilliant and I so admire you Frans.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Much Love Always,
Kelle Marie
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My dear friend
Thank you so much for your comment. I am glad the poem was enjoyed. Blessings to you too. Frans
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Upon Awakening
This is so serene, Frans, very beautiful yet deep, definitely provoking thought. I rather think my mornings start this way, that is whenever it is I awaken; if I've been asleep at all the night before.
One tiny type: quite/quiet
Luv & Hugs, BonQ
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Thank you BonQ
I have been up since 5 am and often try to write what I experience. The Finclo enables this. I love its 'surprise' final stanza, not matter the previous two. It is as if there is a message 'for the day'. Lovies and hugs to you too. Frans
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