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Swirling with Stars

Before I sleep,
I say a prayer,
chant,
mantra...

I thank
the Universe...
For all I have
been given.

Each passing
smile,
each small
blessing,
my magic
for the
day.

Then,
as my eyes
close,
I map my
road for
the next day.

As sleep catches
my weary mind,
I float up, out,
and into the stars.

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Hope you like it ...I usually write fresh for contests!

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  • aboomer silver member
    February 8
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    Lovely! And I really like your last verse!


  • jayyniecakes.
    February 7

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    i feel like the lines are too short... they need to be longer than one or two or three words.

    but other than that... good luck.