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Just Kill me!
I cannot take much more.
I want to die, just set me free.
My crumbling body shattered on the floor.

Just one bullet to the temple.
Blood upon the wall.
This death so simple.
My soul trapped in my hall

 

Let me be!
I can feel no more

See my corpse as it rots
Trapped behind this wooden door

 

This Hell in my head

Trapped and soiled 

Broken is my life

So calm am I 

Now I lay dead

What do you honestly think?

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  • brooklynngirl
    February 15

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    Awesome imagery, and a stunning write. However I hope this isn't a reflection of what you're going through. If it is, i hope things improve and life continues to get better.


  • Zaedyns Mommy
    February 10
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    you should write something that isnt so depressing, but it was good dont get me wrong.