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fun with my honey

fun with my honey
her hugs put smiles on my mug
kisses wipe them off

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  • poetryality silver member
    February 7, 2009
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    A small typo... honey instead of "honet". I know the Y is next to the T. LOL

    A wonderful haiku which reminds me why I stay married to my sweetheart. God bless you my friend. You are 94 ! Wow! We can only pray to be as favored as you and your wife. It is evident that the two of you are very "happy". Good luck in the contest.


    Much Love Always ♥

    Renee


  • azure85 gold member
    February 7, 2009

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    fun with my honet
    her hugs put smiles on my mug
    kisses wipe them off

    Oh, this is so sweet! What a happy-ku, you must be the happiest couple on earth!