You and I are children
Passing secret notes under table
Do you love me?
(I love you)
Check one:
Yes No
Am I important to you?
(You are very very very important to me)
Check one:
Yes No
Do you miss me enough to cry?
(That's how much I miss you, every day)
Check one:
Yes No
Just a note to say I loved our visit.
Wish I could play in your snow.
Hope to find a way to see you again soon
It is just so far away...
Love,
Paw paw
A contest entry
- A Million Miles Away. . . by JinSays.
1150 points, ended February 9, 11 entries
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check yes or no.... awwww. this is adorable, innocent and heartwarming.
loved it !
~ w -
Sweet, it reminded me of the conversation lollies I used to buy as a child, and save special ones for those I loved. Somehow I couldn't say the words, but I could pass them on in writing...
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Sweet as sweet can be.
Leaves one feeling loved, even if they're not your granddaughter.
Loved it.
jin
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How heartwarming ...
on a sunny snow day.
Love
Myra
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This is a beautiful take on the prompt and it says it all about being a grandparent.
All the best in the contest.
Sue x
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