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Just Me

I'm not perfect
And i'm no little fluff
I may be to wide
Or too tall
I may have a spirit
That is not easy to tame
I work hard and don't give a shit
You can spite me all you want
But don't you dare come lookin for a fight
Because a fight is damn what you'll get
Now i'm not one for too much trouble
Though I've had my days
I may not fit in with much of any group
But that doesn't mean I don't count
I work hard and don't give up easy
I may cover up some of whats inside
And only my friends can see the real true me
But don't you doubt
That what you see is what you get
I'm a country girl
And am proud to stand by it
I can be hard headed and may get carried away
But thats just me
I don't beat around the bush
Nor do I waste my time
Tryin to act cool
I am who I am
And you might as well deal with it
Because i'm not changing
Anytime soon
So ask anybody
I'm just me
And that is all you get

Author notes

This is not one of my better poems. I may go back and change it, but right now i'm tired and don't feel like it. So here it is. Oh and it may be too many words for the contest. I just wrote, sorry.

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  • meoncloud9
    March 4

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    hey.. that's cool..
    It seems to me that you're a real hard worker.
    I liked this line in the poem,
    'I work hard and don't give up easy'
    Good write.. Keep it up..


  • Maybe Anastasia
    February 11

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    ahh I can so hear your tone of voice! great job gurly. (; you're you and thats why we love ya.... or its at lest why we put up with you. (:


  • just weak hands
    February 7

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    Ahaha don't worry, I know what ya mean lol Once those creative juices get started, they don't stop ! Don't worry, every entry i've read so far has gone over too xD

    I'm glad that you take pride in you being a country girl :] Everyone should be glad to be who they are. Very honest, and informative, and I'm glad that you have such confidence in yourself.

    Great write ! Thanks for entering and best of luck !