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Enough!

Are You Proud Of Yourself?

You have hurt everyone who loves you
Does that mean you dont love us?
You dont love me?
Because if you did...
Then you wouldnt want to die
You'd would want to live
You would do everything you can to live

Your my brother
And I love you
But we are not friends anymore

I wish you would stay away
That way you cant hurt me
Everytime you come near me
The anger builds up
And it feels like Im going to explode
If I keep it in any longer

I can't do this anymore...
It hurts too much

If you want to kill yourself
Then go pick up a fucking gun
And get it over with

Don't make me watch you do it..
Your killing me with you
And I want to live

If your going to smoke,
If your going to drink,
If your going to not look after yourself
Then get the fuck out of my life
Because I've had enough
I'm tired

I know its hard
The life you have to live
But its all your gonna get
You had a chance
You blew it.
Deal with the consequences
You got yourself into your financial situation
You killed your kidney all by yourself
You made your life
It could have been better

Your my brother
And I love you
But you obviously don't love me
Not enough anyway

Please tell me what you think

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  • wuzisname
    February 10
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    Very Powerful Write

    You show strong emotion in your pen. I feel your pain as I read your every word. Each word struck a chord. I can see the love here and the pain of loosing someone so close. You have successfully and poetical got you message across.
    This is simply outstanding


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 7
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