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Withered truth

There is something removed
from life today
As I feed the pending doom
I hear you say:

I despise you
Implore you to
Give tears through
Bleeding eyes on queue

For you are the bastard
Who has slain my emotion
Like a simple cattle herd
Giving eternal corrosion

I tired of your faltered commitment
Honey coated words so false
While you howl in a fit
Of rage so terse

That even I have missed it.

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  • myrataal silver member
    March 2

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    I saw you online ...

    and came to look for new poetry.

    This poem gripped me in its overwhelming emotion and its remorse. I can but pray that all is well with the poet and that the poem reflected upon a process ... towards brighter tomorrows.

    Love to you.
    Myra