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It Was All So Simple Then




I want to know...
what it would take
to turn back time-

back to the time
of skinned up knees,
and questions that
I could not find
the answers too.

Back to a time
of "mommy, mommy
can I have a cookie?"

it was all so simple then-
just a hug and you
were all better

those days have
come and gone
and now-

you're all grown up-
and on your way.

Now there's another woman
in your life-
she holds your hand,
and loves you too.

But I loved you first-
and I'll love you last-
I'll love you till the last
breath escapes my lungs.

I loved you from
the beginning,
and I'll love you
till the end.

I look at you now-
and you're all grown up,
but in my eyes,
you'll always be
my little boy,

with skinned up knees
and questions that
I can't find the
answers too.




Author notes

I was listening to the radio, and heard the song,
of a father to his daughter, about her being all grown up...

well this is for each one of my boys,
DJ, Josh and Justin...

I love you all

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  • penman gold member
    February 17, 2009
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    Excellent

    A terrific write. So touching and well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • Amera gold member
    February 11, 2009

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    When you find out what it takes to turn time back to that time, please let me know. I want a cookie too. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Desire gold member
    February 7, 2009

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    Precious~

    Aaaaaaaaaaw now this swells the eyes
    Munchkins grow up so darn fast

    Oy! This is a Beauty of a verse Precious~
    Woot!
    Love this~ Excellent I say~
    one of my Munchkins is grown but the other is sprouting quite fast
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~