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Profound



Profoundly treading
    the ocean where all
    life started
    is nothing
    if you can't
    laugh when
    you fall in.

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  • shattered.frisco
    October 21, 2009

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    congrats on the silver. I liked the ending. You always write so sad...but at the same time, its not? i dont know, i guess its harder to describe with my words than it is to comprehend in my mind. anyway, i loved it.


  • movedon
    February 22, 2009

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    congrats on the silver. I liked the ending. You always write so sad...but at the same time, its not. loved it.


  • Nom de Plume
    February 7, 2009

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    Excellent take on the prompt, and indeed, without laughter it would be a dull world... congrats
    Cheers


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    February 7, 2009

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    Oh yes.....! I couldn't agree with you more.. simply stated but proufound none the less!!

    best of luck!

    becca


  • Cannonsfire
    February 7, 2009
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    lol yep now that's profound

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