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Ben

There was a fine fellow named Ben
who lived to be one hundred ten.
When asked how he did it,
He said, "I ain't hid it,
I'm pickled in whiskey and gin."

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  • Mrs D
    February 9
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    lol.....lol...
    good one...funny !

    thx for entering


  • WhisperingMystic
    February 7

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    a good Chuckle !

    Nice job rhymin' it all ta gether like that.
    Sounds like a good beer drinkin' song don't it.    Wink