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false alarm

last night i drempt
that somebody actully loved me
no hope
no harm
just another false alarm

this is from a book i read

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  • Tadd
    June 2
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    poetic perfection
    short and sweet
    meaning well shown
    well writen


  • Mc25
    March 21

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    haha short and sweet... and sorta darkly funny... or maybe thats just me being fucked up... whatever!


  • Ice Queen
    March 20
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    I hope this isn't true but its good. Good job


  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    March 7
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    Wow,
    I loved this!
    I love the idea,
    but i hope its not true.


  • xxjustmiixx
    February 21
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    short and sweet

    you give the main point out~

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