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the bathroom floor

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  • xxjustmiixx
    February 21
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    unique style

    i love how you talk about the cuts..lol love the personification~nice poems. Same here too..


  • xXemo-teddybearXx
    February 11
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    aw im glad you liked it
    and im trying to find the right person to talk to


  • loveangerbeauty
    February 8
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    oh hun, im sorry and i've done the same thing. get help, there is hope out there <3 nice poem, too, very descriptive =]