In my darkened soul
these demons are out of control
I'll hold you close to me
whispering softly in your ear
speaking words as if I were actually there
bringing you in
slowly
as your screams of agony fade
your blood is on me tonight
just know that I was there
during your worst moments
I was there to watch you fade
your soul is beaten
but so is mine
so hush
dont cry
dont say a word
welcome death upon you
let your soul die
dont try to breath
dont try to save your life
dont try to run
dont try to hide
you'll find that I'm in your shadows
waiting to take your life
and forget about you tonight
A contest entry
- For my favourites and the 'Beautiful Minds Dark Addictions' group by Winged Unicorn.
700 points, ended February 26, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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coolio it's awesome
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Thanks for entering : )
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no problem ^.^
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Wow
This gave me chills the darkness and pained emotion is clear within your words. I especially love "welcome death upon you let your soul die" It is beautifully phrased. Really good write : )
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AMAZING...
Sis I gotta say that this poem leaves me well...speechless.
Good job, Keep it up
Nessa
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WOW
and you said u were terrible at this.... this poem is amazing, it shows how you feel,,, and probably how most people feel, it shure show's how i feel, you did a great job on this poem,,, just like all the others... keep it up, i cant wait to read your next poem,,,, ill ttyl, keep it up
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