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Medical Analysis "Biting Evidence"

After my experienced examination
Of my friend and patient's altercation.
Meeting a knife,poisoning and strangulation
Resulting in his final demise,
It dawned on me that I must realize.

The maid alone with the pellet of poison
Nor that knife she thrust in him despising
Was not the forensic evidence that proved
To be his cause of demise, yet so...abused!
But that strangulating scarf hiding marks.

Though a scarf was but a diversionary tactic
Insinuating a visual strangulation tragic.
Upon a much closer physical examination
Two punctures to his jugular found illumination
Resulted blood letting so..grotesquely diabolic.

Question is..who of those amongst the swill
Of servants,family and acquaintances took their fill.
Of hatred on him in vicious vile bites  
That resulted in a despised loss of life.
Such insanity seems a vampiric blight!
3. Dr. Emmett Farquar - his Doctor and friend - age 57

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I, Dr.Emmett Farquar-his doctor and friend believe Louis Arquette - New neighbour is our murderer.

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  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    February 9
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    Ahhh.. I wonder who you suspect lol.. the vampire maybe?


  • Topaze gold member
    February 8

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    Very nicely done, this is bocoming very interesting. I believe there are three people involved and they are all guilty of murder. My best wishes.


  • Tirrell
    February 8
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    I do like this,
    well done.


  • yukitosumi
    February 7

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    Will you be taking tea tonight, sir?

    The Maid

    P.S: Love the medical analysis tone to the poem!


    • suseann
      February 8

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      No thank you Miss. I may never drink anything but a brandy again. And even then,only from a fresh sealed bottle.

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