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Beasts of Conscience

Fetid chambers horrify me-get out!
Bastard cursing-race of evil; caged lamb
Purest darling stag-limbs breathing;stench mounts
Tiny doe of nature bared from days cam.

Hide the pictures woolen screams in dank hell
Press all natures stares from glassy eyed holes
Blackened skull of homo ape loves death bell
Moaning dragging thoughts of pity seize noels.

Blood from seas  sin within mighty China
Shrieks of holocaust are sounding brick hearts
Fattened trials spit unpleasant diner
Bloated feces, human belly booms fart.

Worldly Cravings without slowing grow drab
Beasts of conscience stare in poultry food-lab.

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  • Janice M Pickett
    February 7
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    This is powerful. We are powerful. Together we CAN and will make something happen. Thank you