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Surrender

Hidden in the darkness
Shadows all around
There is no hope anywhere
My world is crashing down

"Surrender your reality"
The spirit speaks to me
"Fall into your fantasy"
But misery is all I see

-Andi

Author notes

I don't care to tell the backstory of this.
-Andi

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  • mzunderstood
    February 14
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    I love this. You could be talking about depression as well


  • Heather Lea gold member
    February 13
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    I like how this flows.


  • xtayzerx
    February 11

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    WOW!

    THIS IS FANTASTIC!!! IT SAYS SO MUCH IN SO LITTLE WORDS!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!(is there anyway to make the fonts bigger??!) I NEED BIGGER FONTS TO EXPRESS MYSELF!!!!!!


    ella


    • Andiness
      February 11
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      yeah, but you have to get a gold membership

      And thanks!