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I never meant to...

I never meant to hurt you..
The dissapointment of it all
Leaving who I was to become someone else
My identity mistaken
Ripped away from me

I never meant to disappoint you...
This isn't who I am
This doesn't happen to kids like me
I'm not that person
The ghost of me left behind
Shaken from soul
Taken away from me

Who am I?
Do I even know myself?
I'm not that person
I was taken away
The misery of
My painstaking death
Who I am now
Is not who I want to be

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  • Asonine
    February 12

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    ooh, emotional, I like it though, sad but I like it, though... I live in other peoples sadness.... what can I say I am strange like that...

    good overall, the flow was iffy but jaja