Lips bleeding
chapped from no longer
feeling the silk of your
lips upon them.
I cry at my loss of your love,
the rain falling from eyes
coats my lips in salty embrace.
The feeling of pain and being stung
happens all over again.
I know the tears only seek to help
but they hurt even more
because they remind I'll never feel
pleasure upon these lacerated lips again,
but only the patter of rain.
Author notes
9. Raindrops on lacerated lips
Hmm...I don't think you liked my other one lolz 
Luckily my muse seems to have temporarily come back so I hope this one is better!
♥ Kathraina
[pic found on google]
In a list
A contest entry
- 26 Unique Prompts (pw allowed) by Rhythm Child.
450 points, ended March 2, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Any Poem Welcome by jayyniecakes..
1158 points, ended February 16, 188 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING GOES by VerminVomit.
1300 points, ended March 9, 146 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
soo....whats your honest opinion?
Comments
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This was an interesting poem. I really liked this and the emotion was great. The imagery was awesome but I felt the flow could have been a bit better. The picture in your poem fits perfectly with your poem though. THanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
Josh
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omg I love this... especially these lines:
Lips bleeding
chapped from no longer
feeling the silk of your
lips upon them.
Finalist!!!!!!!! :]
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wow
I like this one, though it is very sad. Welcome back to your muse although you seem to write brilliantly without it.
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which was your other one ? xD
opening lines were brilliant
and you have taken the prompt LITERALLY
which people dont lol and thats how i wanted it
thanks for the entry
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