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The Feast

Enchanted serpentine webs
form to capture
creatures, souls to ravish!

Author notes

i meant "creatures and their souls" the physical and the non-tangiable/non-physical.. not 'creatures' souls'

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    February 12

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    Love the dark imagery portrayed here, stirred my dormant muse somewhat. A very neat read. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    February 8

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    This came out very well. Excellent job! Loved the different turn you took with this.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**