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Nothing Wrong With Love

There's nothing wrong with love
And there's nothing wrong with you
There is a certain man
Who is waiting to meet you, true

Love is the most wonderful feeling
It makes you walk on air
Your feet will dance you down the street
People will notice that certain flair

You'll find yourself singing
And smiling a lot more too
Everything will bring you pleasure
Because your heart is happy and true

So treat yourself to a new hairdo
Buy a dress that'll knock his eyes out
He'll come running to hold you tight
Saying "I love you" with a shout

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 13, 2009

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    Ah..what a beautiful thought ..and very much true..and inspiring with a definate message to follow..thanks for sharing....


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    February 8, 2009
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    love doesnt appear to stink with this poem .its romantic breezy fabulous.good luck..peter


    • Katie Lazette
      February 8, 2009
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      Peter, Love doesn't stink. If it doesn't work out between two people, there has to be a reason. True love doesn't die. Love relationships are a give and take relationship.


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    February 7, 2009

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    Thank you for your heart spoken entry, but I really have given up now after so long I have a new hair do have tried everything under the sun, so now retire from my ways, but thank you for the lovely words anyway, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Still Standing gold member
    February 7, 2009
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    Thank you

    This piece speaks directly to me. Thank u loads for sharing this.

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