There's nothing wrong with love
And there's nothing wrong with you
There is a certain man
Who is waiting to meet you, true
Love is the most wonderful feeling
It makes you walk on air
Your feet will dance you down the street
People will notice that certain flair
You'll find yourself singing
And smiling a lot more too
Everything will bring you pleasure
Because your heart is happy and true
So treat yourself to a new hairdo
Buy a dress that'll knock his eyes out
He'll come running to hold you tight
Saying "I love you" with a shout
A contest entry
- Love Stinks. by Poetryintheblood.
700 points, ended February 7, 2009, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah..what a beautiful thought ..and very much true..and inspiring with a definate message to follow..thanks for sharing....
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Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate it very much.
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love doesnt appear to stink with this poem .its romantic breezy fabulous.good luck..peter


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Peter, Love doesn't stink. If it doesn't work out between two people, there has to be a reason. True love doesn't die. Love relationships are a give and take relationship.
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Thank you for your heart spoken entry, but I really have given up now after so long I have a new hair do have tried everything under the sun, so now retire from my ways, but thank you for the lovely words anyway, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you
This piece speaks directly to me. Thank u loads for sharing this. -
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You are most welcome. I hope everything is going well for you.
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