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Companion

Dark fur
Eager eyes
Rumbling purr
Raking claws
Young cat

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My new kitten, who seems to have grown by half in only a week! His name is in the poem.

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  • Failed-Dreamer
    May 22

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    Kitty claws are soo sharp, same goes for their teeth, but they are so cute. All the mischief they get themselves into is just as adorable because they just look at you and you can't be mad at them. Haha :]


    • Jornada
      May 23
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      This is so true! My kitten-become-cat that I have now even fights with me, but he is so adorable!


  • simplefarmgirl
    February 7

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    haha! I totally never would've noticed the "DERRY"! Thanks for mentioning that... :-P

    Very cute and to the point. :-)


    • Jornada
      February 9
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      Thanks! And if there's a point, it's in his claws--I'm scarred! :-)


  • Mr Violet
    February 7
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    aww. nice, concise description. you really know how to choose the right words for short poetry.

    • Jornada
      February 7
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      Thank you! It is so short that I almost didn't post it, but your recent short one helped me decide to go ahead! :-)

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