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Carrying a Grudge

To carry a grudge
To hate who you love, all because of a few words.
Its true that words hurt.
But not only do they hurt...they scar
Leaving the pain permanently etched into your mind.
Torture beyond belief
To want to hurt someone or something
just....not her
At the same time
you want to show her the same pain
THE SAME HELL THAT YOU HAVE BEEN THROUGH
but you care too much for her..

Death would be easier...

Author notes

this poem is actually a few years old. i wrote it during my "Great Depression" and i just found it.

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