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Louder Silence

I am lost in life
to the point of being mute
Tears speak louder than I

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Haiku

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  • Antebellum
    June 23

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    ooh wow this is stunning. I'm not a fair judge of haikus,I dont really understand how they work,
    but I love the wording here.
    Amazing write.


  • T-Dizzle Mcnizzle
    June 17
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    This poem speaks volumes! Awesome!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    June 17

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    Wow, what a short yet powerful write!
    You said so much in these sixteen words
    here. Well done and thanks for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Beauty Of Silence
    February 8

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    WOW!

    this is so short yet so impactful. i like the wording, and the last line says it all. it just sums up and wraps up the entire poem so beautifully great job, keep penning


  • GotLilt
    February 7
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    You might want to drop the 's' from speaks in last line. I like it though!

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