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sitting

Sitting waiting
wanting wishing
for things that
cannot be as so
and wanting nothing
but nothing wanting
is like im
letting go
so carry on
and stand up proud
ill revive something
in dreams
for nothing is ever
lacking
or as hollow as
it seems
follow now
the smiling face
and laugh untill
you cry
for without it
and nothing here
you will surely die

what do u think?

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 24

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    Words truly well said. Hope still lingers deep within the words, but feels as if needing to let go. Enjoyed the read.