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Bye.

A silent death is the way to go,
without goodbyes or any fuss,
I won't be missed
and I deserve to go.

I'm a bad person,
I hurt people,
break people,
I'm useless.

Disappearing into nothingless,
everyone will be happier,
I'm not worth anything
so whats the point in staying.

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  • fairytalelovestory
    February 9
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    awww this is so sad.

  • starving-to-survive
    February 8

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    Ok this is exacly what i was after! i have tears falling down my face! this is amazing. Your words are so heart breaking and painful. I am so sorry you feel this way. I can relate to this so well. How you feel like you are not worth baing here, that no one will even care if you go, but i am telling you this now, people will care, i know it is impossible to see right now, but they do. If you ever need to talk babe, i am here for you. i can relate to your pain better than you may realise. Thank you for entering my contest, and i hope that if you need to or want to you will message me. Please try and say safe


  • She burns
    February 7

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    this is very painful, so much hurt and suffering, I hope you feel better soon...

  • N.E.Haymanali
    February 7
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    A good poem written in rhetorical stances intelligently chosen.


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 7

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    YOU ARE LOVED!!!

    I even though am able to understand how you feel as I have felt that way also at times, also know you are loved, are cared about and wanted in this world. 's I have found in my long years that everyone has others who do care for them, you may not have those who care around you now though I believe the ones who you are living with now do care. You must keep faith and hope alive within you my dear! Just keep being the open, caring and lively person you are and you will find those who do care and will be with you. 's

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